Friday, 6 February 2009

our progress

Right we have done more editing, still trying to create tension. We have now got all of our footage as we filmed the last few bits last night so now we can crack with with making the narrative more clear and have the typical conventions of a thriller opening!!! We have a had a few changes with the storyline as we have now added the missing poster, this will make our audience ask questions and be a little confused which is what we want, just don't want them totally confused!!!! We have had a bit of trouble on trying to decide how we should create our titles as we want people to see them but not make them the main focus and how we can link the titles into the storyline without them just looking random and out of place, we quite liked the idea of having a poster on the wall in the bedroom of a film but having our titles at the bottom, but we didn't think that would really work, but we have decided to use photographs in our title sequence, as we will show the photographs and have them turning over to show the back of them where we will have the titles written or being written on the back, this will also link in with the storyline and create a good effect!!
So now we have got all of the footage we will edit it together and will be a step closer to our finished project!!!!!

1 comment:

Miss Mann said...

Hey Ladies - I must say the changes you have made really help to create an engaging narrative for your audience. I really like the idea of the missing poster - this connects the two time frames together but the zoom seems quite abrupt here. Have a look at this together and see what you think. I'm glad you have decided on photos for your credits rather than posters - nice reference to Memento!